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Premetto che io ho guardato solo la s1 (che, per inciso, posso recitare battuta per battuta) e che necessito di qualcuno che abbia visto almeno fino alla 4 (essendo la mia storia ambientata dopo quella stagione)
La storia era stata già iniziata un paio di ani fa, poi l'ho abbandonata ma vorrei riprenderla/riscriverla e vederla conclusa.
Avverto per gli affezionati della shipper Harm/Mac che questa fanfiction li riguarda ma non in un buon modo. Ho bisogno di qualcuno che mi aiuti a caratterizzare bene (per quanto serve almeno) i personaggi che non conosco o non conosco abbastanza, con cui discutere gli sviluppi della trama e lo stile di stesura quando necessario.

Spero che qualcuno possa aiutarmi ^_^

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It is painful and delicius between us, a starved need beyond hunger, and somewhere in it is the thought: I have never said love before. And though there's a memory of beds and faces gone or yet to come, the echo of the same words deeply meant and even better understood, this first time a piece of self arcs out like a fierce comet, burning with a never-again brightness and falling, always remembered, down the lonely space of life.[Firelord - Parke Godwin]

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