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01/03/2011 12:22

...più precisamente, sul telefilm andato in onda negli anni '90 (quello con Duncan Regehr nella parte del protagonista).
Temo che la mia storia non sia particolarmente appassionante, anzi... Ad ogni modo avrei bisogno di verificare se la trama può funzionare o se c'è bisogno di qualche modifica (possibilmente non troppo radicale...), e se per caso sono andata "fuori carattere" con alcuni personaggi.
C'è qualche coraggioso volontario disposto a farlo?
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07/03/2011 11:55

Mmm, mi sa che lascio perdere e invio direttamente la storia al sito...
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07/03/2011 12:26

Mi sa che quel telefilm è al tempo stesso troppo vecchio (per i giovani) e troppo recente (per gli amanti attempati del cavaliere mascherato): io ad esempio conosco molto bene Zorro nelle sue versioni d'epoca, ma molto poco il telefilm in questione (e quasi per niente il film con credo Banderas, tra l'altro).
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07/03/2011 13:58

Ecco. Io conosco i vecchissimi telefilm, il film con Delon e quello con Banderas. Questo me lo ricordo molto poco.
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13/05/2011 18:46

Io lo guardavo ai tempi...se non hai paura dei miei tempi biblici, puoi mandarmela!

Edit: noto che ci ho messo un tempo biblico pure a rispondere al post!
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14/05/2011 08:46

L'ho già mandata al sito per la pubblicazione... comunque se vuoi darle un'occhiata lo stesso... dimmi tu...
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14/05/2011 15:59

Ok! Se vuoi, mandala pure! Ti mando un messaggio con la mia mail!
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16/05/2011 10:16

...io non ho ricevuto nessun messaggio...
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16/05/2011 17:25

Ops... a chi l'avrò inviato allora? XD
Vabbè, ci ho appena riprovato!
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16/05/2011 17:45

Ops, io pensavo me l'avessi inviato via mail ffz... invece è su leo.it (che non guardo mai...)
Comunque ti ho appena mandato la storia via mail! ^^
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16/05/2011 17:50

Ops, io pensavo me l'avessi inviato via mail ffz... invece è su leo.it (che non guardo mai...)
Comunque ti ho appena mandato la storia via mail! ^^
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19/05/2011 11:02

Ho scoperto che stanno ritrasmettendo la seconda stagione del telefilm alle 7.25 del mattino su rete4! Penso che ci darò un'occhiata per vedere se ho fatto errori nel mio racconto...
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30/06/2011 12:21

Io ci riprovo... Sto scrivendo un altro racconto su Zorro, e avrei bisogno di qualcuno che in particolare verificasse se la trama può funzionare o meno... Se anche non conoscete bene la serie in questione, posso fornirvi una breve descrizione del carattere dei vari personaggi...
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